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Rediscovering Modernist Architect and Designer Eileen Gray

In this essay on architect Eileen Gray, the student argues for Gray's inclusion in the modernist canon. The student describes her innovative window and furniture design, and profiles her E-1027 house, famously resented by Le Corbusier.
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Bridget's feedback:

"This essay presents clear evidence of your mastery of the topic; your commentary and analysis, by taking advantage of your knowledge of the context and work of other designers, is impressive -- the reader feels they are in good hands. I assume your final draft will present images, but do check any further formatting work against your style guide.

The main task in producing the final draft will be tidying up diction and syntax to ensure clarity and precision; this will also make sure the authorial ethos, so well established by your treatment of the topic, is not negatively impacted by errors or reader frustration. (Related, use "Gray", not the first name, throughout.) As part of this task, consider opportunities for revision at the level of style and efficiency, beyond correcting mechanics issues. For example, the first sentence, into the first half of the second, will benefit from a streamlining revision (e.g., "Due to a significant gender gap in architecture, some women do not...")."

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