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Kibin. (2024). The life of walmart founder sam walton. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-life-of-walmart-founder-sam-walton-GS7OQ81w
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"This is an interesting and inspiring story. Take care with details. For example, perhaps the company name has changed over the years, but today it seems to be “Walmart.” You mention that Sam Walton made just $75/month at his first job, but that was 80 years ago, and the average salary seems to have been around $114. The reader needs to know such things to make a valid comparison. Cited sales figures should indicate a base period, such as $44 million per year. You cite sales of 5360/person in the US. I feel that this is $360. In any case, you should identify the unit, i.e., the dollar. The story of Sam Walton is inspiring, but you should look at it from different perspectives and address criticism of his company. A story that fails to address criticism can lack credibility in the reader’s eyes. You have a good introduction, but there is no real conclusion. You should complete the essay with a paragraph summarizing the work."
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Kibin. (2024). The life of walmart founder sam walton. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/the-life-of-walmart-founder-sam-walton-GS7OQ81w
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("The Life of Walmart Founder Sam Walton.")
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