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Who would have ever fathomed dirt bikes would enter mainstream sports as a fierce competitor This sport is for people who love pushing it to the edge people who love fear Motocross exemplifies speed power and agility If you put all these factors into one and you dont have the proper equipment to perform tragedy can strike at any momentIn June of 1998 Matt James and I went on a late ride at around dusk Before we left the house I had been trying to fix my back break for about and hour or so when I decided I could ride without it All three of us head out to the old irrigation ditch behind our high school There you can find many cliff jumps so it is one of our favorite places to ride Everything is going really well for most of the ride then Matt challenges me to a race I accepted his offer forgetting Im without a back brakeWe both pull up and look around the ditch and then decided on a course that we will run At the start Im in the lead going in to the first turn Matt is about a bike length behind me when we come upon a hairpin turn Im thinking to myself Slow down for this turn coming up but I wanted to win The hairpin turn came up fast I misjudged my speed and fly into the berm Now keep in mind that berms are used to help us turn around corners Im heading straight for it with too much speed and no back break this equals disaster With the berm seconds away I remember I have a front brake Pulling it as hard as I could I fly over the handlebars and the bike comes crashing down on top of my head Feeling the bike plow into my helmet I promptly enter the world of unconsciousness and pain Rushing to my attention Matt
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