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It was a beautiful day on the open fields of Ireland A comfortable cottage was the only item dotting the landscape for at least five miles The door opened and out stepped a young man He was not too tall his blonde hair gathered behind him in a ponytail His eyes sparkled ever-so-slightly in the morning sun as he stretched with a loud groan He strode a few steps from the cottage and looked around It was a great day out He was dressed comfortably in slightly baggy blue jeans and a black t-shirt and since no one else was awake he decided to go for a short walkThe flat fields seemed to go on forever in all directions but after a few short minutes of walking he arrived at a hill It was then that he first heard it A beautiful voice which broke the silence He had never heard anything like it It sang no words just sounds He had to know where the sound came from He quickly crested the hill and spotted the sourceIt was a girl of about sixteen years of age She had lush auburn tinted hair wore a plain white dress that shimmered faintly in the breeze and was very beautiful almost ethereal She turned to look up at him with her sparkling teal eyes She ceased singing and smiled up at him Hello there she said with a thick Irish accent Hi he replied He walked slowly down the hill stumbling slightly on the steep incline She giggled And just who might you be She queried Im Timothy but people call me Tim he said smiling Stay cool Tim stay cool he thought Well Tim she replied Im Fiona Tis a pleasure to meet you She extended her hand to him He shook it which seemed to surprise her for a moment So what are you doing roamin the open wilds of Ireland Tim she asked He
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