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The Great Halloween Spoof It was a dark and kooky night when it happened My worst nightmare happened My friends and I were coming home from the big football game with some girls when pause my friend dared me to go into the so called old haunted mansion on N Klent and Broadway Ave Why he had to do it in front of my friends and some other kids from school I was trapped and he knew it So I walked up the old cracked walkway Went up the stairs as the wood whined under the weight and turned the doorknob Phew I said as the clicking of the knob informed the door was locked Its locked I yelled as I leaned against an old metal pole that probably once held a flag Then clunk clunk creak pause the metal pole had been pushed down by the weight I had placed on it and the door had opened As I entered the house I thought it was the end of me for I stood atop an endless void Correction I stood in the center of a void looking down into a never-ending drop Wait a second There was something wrong here and it wasnt the fact that I felt like I was going to lose my lunch so I jumped Clunk I felt so stupid I was standing in a room painted to look like a huge hole So proudly I walked across what was once a frightening room Wearing a smug little smile on my face pause until I fell into what was a void except for the slide that bore me farther into the belly of the beast that was this house I was now in the basement or so the sign on the wall said Now I was in deep trouble I was trapped in the basement of a haunted and overall freaky house
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