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THE LOVE STORY BY ELI WHATLEY INTRODUCTION Ive never been one for Love Stories but this one touched me in a BIG way It happened to a friend of mine and Ill never forget the way that it changed him For as long as I knew Sebastian he had always liked the women folk He never ever went through the cootie stage I remember when he turned five years old that he bawled his eyes out because he couldnt marry a girl whom at the time was probably twelve That was all he wanted He changed thoughsomehow he changed I will try to tell you his story the best that I can Actually the story is about me for I am that friend Billy CHAPTER ONE The day was beautiful not a cloud in the sky Just the kind of day that I had been waiting for I walked across the courtyard trying to find her My heart was racing about a hundred miles an hour I kept on asking myself Do I have the guts Finally I saw her The sunlight made her beautiful blonde hair look angelic Her face was glowing and her lips as red as apples I just wanted to go up to her and plant this big wet sloppy kiss on her that would make her forget her name Ive got to do it I said to myself I walked up to her almost in slow motion When I was about two feet away she turned around and look deep in to my eyes It was like we were looking in past our eyes down to our soul Finally we stood face to face We stared at each other for at least a good five minutes when we both went for each others lips I closed my eyes
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