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Lucy in the sky with diamonds Lucy in the sky with diamonds Repetitive excerpts of my favorite songs played in my mind and sounded in my breath Crisp cool humid air wisped around my body The frequent tickle of spider lines entangling around on my forehead and nose told that the trail was less used The sound of my footsteps intermixed with my breath During the run I entered a genuine trance feeling only the trail beneath my feet and hearing the sound of solitude Being alone outside in the mountains with no trace of human development did I become aware of how easily you could be taken out of this world This particular run that I set out on earlier this summer was by no means your average out and back run That day I set out on a journey to run further than I have ever run But who would want to run on pavement the boring generic route that is overused Instead I picked to run on a trail that had no maintenance and almost no use The further section of the Treadwell Trail was perfect The smell of the moss the landscape not spoiled by human litter and garbage all made me feel more real The trail ran out beneath my feet several times during the adventure leading into brush or game trails Towards the last section of trail before I turned around did I encounter my changing pointTraversing the mountain side slope did I hear the snapping of branches and brush My body tensed sounds became louder eyes went tunnel vision blocking out all the surrounding foliage In front of me a shadow raised itself from beneath the brush The bear saw me locked eyes on mine and came closer Immediately I roared advancing several meters towards him hoping my bluff was enough The bear stopped raised on his back two legs and turned onto all fours and disappeared into
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