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"Your first sentence lacks a subject: what has over 300 million members? You should not place a space after a comma in a number. Since you speak of the past, you do not write “the founder is.” You say the major scriptures (plural) include “many others.” If there are that many, then most of them are not “major.” Do not capitalize common nouns. Avoid comma splices, i.e., the use of a comma to link what should be two sentences. Under “Confucianism,” how does the last sentence in the first paragraph relate to the topic? “Worshipped” is misspelled. You say Confucianism has been dominant, and that it is enjoying a renaissance. If it is so thoroughly dominant, then there can be no such thing as a renaissance. Replace the three dashes between dates with an en dash (character code on a PC, option-dash on a Mac), and leave no spaces. Use consistent notation for years, either BC/AD or BCE/CE. It is good practice to include a serial comma after the penultimate member of a list, unless you know the format does not require it. “Bad” is an adjective, and should not be applied to “turn out.” Write “poorly" instead."
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Kibin. (2024). Chinese religion: ancestor worship, buddhism, confucianism, and taoism. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/comparing-and-contrast-of-buddhism-confucianism-and-taoism-6e1CUzAi
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("Chinese Religion: Ancestor Worship, Buddhism, Confucianism, and Taoism.")
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