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"Your summary of the different plays shows your understanding of the main plot points, but your analysis does not come through in discussing whether Shakespeare’s understanding of comedy matches contemporary views of comedy. If possible, revision should be done to cut down on the amount of plot review and focus on analyzing the plays’ comedic elements. Editing is needed to address writing convention errors. Sentences with parallel structure problems and run-on sentences should be recast for clarity. There are many typos, including the use of “was” instead of “ways,” and spacing issues between words and between a word and a punctuation mark. Sometimes the wrong term has been used in a statement as seen with the use of “hoars” instead of “whores.” Since you have many short paragraphs, combining them into longer paragraphs would make your writing less choppy. Note that the name “Benedick” should not be censored."
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