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Last week media reports announced that the Chinese army is facing a new problem They are not being defeated by a foreign invasion or struggling against advanced military weapons The army of the worlds largest nation is becoming weak from too much studying Chinas Peoples Liberation Army recently made up a new physical exam to test new recruits Xinhua news agency reported that out of 20 young college graduates only 3 passed the physical check-up Most of the other students failed because of poor eyesight or health problems due to weight All over the country there are reports of growing rates of obesity in young people Near-sightedness is also more common than ever before Why the sudden rise in unhealthy young people Its mostly because of too much time spent studying Starting from elementary school up until college Chinese students study all day and night They dont have time for physical exercise Does this sound familiar Yes Korean students seem to be following the same sad trend Ten fifteen years ago it was not common to see very overweight girls and boys in Korea Now anywhere you go you notice kids struggling with weight problems Its not hard to see what the problem is Kids are sitting at desks all day They eat junk food late at night just to stay awake There isnt enough space or time to play outside So when theyre not stressing and studying teens entertain themselves with their computers This not only results in unhealthy bodies but poor eyesight Sometimes it seems like more kids in the nation wear eyeglasses than not For boys that must later do military service being out-of-shape can often be traumatic It is extremely difficult to suddenly go through hard exercise and training if all youve ever done is eat study and sleep The world is working on finding a balance between nations to avoid war Korean leaders are trying to maintain independent
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