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We are a country so caught up in the latest smart phones iPods andiPads that they are the only things that bring us together Dont youthink a nation called the United States should be united Senator Obamabelieves we could be more united and we may get somewhere in thiseconomy I have to say I completely agree Why shouldnt be united Ittears our country apart to be this way divided and separatedAnother big issue is hope Rather than complaining and moping aroundwhy dont we hope for the bestIf we would just open our eyes andrealize the importance of the two maybe some of Americas problemswould fade away Thats exactly what we need and precisely what we arelacking Our country was built on the foundation of hope and unity andit could have remained be strong if we hadnt lost hope Instead ofhoping for the best we tend to manipulate others andor businesses inorder to get what we want Businesses have gotten sued over dumb thingsfor some peoples desire to be richWe have become a materialistic country We rely on things to make ushappy When this nation was built we relied on family and friends tomake us happy What ever happened to that Our new materialistic waystend to cause resentment jealousy and greed not just among our peersbut also among friends and family With all the negative emotions that wehave brought upon ourselves its difficult to remain united and hopeful Somewhere in America theres a greatful country with no regrets All wehave to do is find it and dig it out Thats a job that hope and unitycan assist us with We cant just sit around and wait for America to fixitself we have to do something about it Nobody ever does anythingabout Americas problems but the government Its our job to stand up and change our ways for the sake of ourcountry Lets lose the pride that prevents our actions and do somethingfor a change That could
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