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WELL I CAN SAY I HAVE NEVER DONE SOMETHING LIKE THIS BEFORE IN THE THREE YEARS I HAVE BEEN COACHING THAT IS I HAVE NEVER WRITTEN A LETTER TO MY TEAM ACTUALLY IT IS FUNNY BECAUSE ABOUT SIX MONTHS AGO I WAS AT THIS SAME COMPUTER WRITING MY COACH A LETTER I HAVE BEEN WHERE ALL YOU HAVE BEEN AND I KNOW HOW IT IS BUT I THINK YOU DONT REALIZE HOW NICE IT IS TO HAVE TWO COACHES THAT CARE ABOUT YOU IN YOUR FUTURE YOU ARE GOING TO COME ACROSS A LOT OF COACHES WHO DONT CARE ABOUT YOU OR YOUR FEELINGS I COULD BET THAT YOU WILL NEVER HAVE ANOTHER COACH ASK YOU TO WRITE THEM HOW YOU FEEL ABOUT ISSUES BECAUSE MOST COACHES JUST DONT CARE AND I COULD ALSO BET THAT YOU WILL NEVER HAVE ANOTHER COACH WRITE YOU A LETTER TO DISCUSS SOMETHING THAT HAPPENED THAT IS BOTHERING HER I CAME HOME TONIGHT AND REALLY DID NOT WANT TO DO MUCH WHY BECAUSE I DID NOT FEEL LIKE MUCH YOU SAY I BRING YOU DOWN AND BRING YOUR SELF-ESTEEM DOWN WELL YOU DID THE SAME THING TO ME YOU REALLY DID LET ME KNOW HOW YOU FELT AND IT WAS ALL ANGER IT SEEMED TO ME THAT YOU ARE SELECTIVE LISTENERS AND ONLY HEAR WHAT YOU WANT TO HEAR YOU SAID TODAY THAT I ONLY TALK ABOUT NEGATIVES WELL THAT IS A BUNCH OF BS MAYBE YOU ONLY CHOOSE TO HEAR AND LISTEN TO THE NEGATIVES AND FORGET ABOUT THE POSITIVE THINGS I DO HAVE TO SAY YOU WILL NEVER BE ABLE TO PUT YOURSELVES INTO MY SHOES UNTIL YOU GET TO EXPERIENCE COACHING IT CAN BE A REAL EASY JOB IF YOU DONT CARE BUT THE PROBLEM WITH ME AND TODD IS THAT WE DO TODD AND I BOTH CARE ABOUT EACH AND EVERY ONE OF YOU INDIVIDUALLY AND THAT IS WHY WE GET UPSET HELL IF I
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