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I am a teacher like a salmon returning home from the ocean With me I carry an over powering instinct to return to the waters where I was born no matter what the cost I will struggle with predators obstacles and above all the current of the river I must overcome these challenges The future of my race depends on my survival I must complete my journeyThe challenges ahead begin immediately My first struggle is with the unpredictable currents of the river These currents are dangerously tricky One minute they will push me toward the bank of the river where hostile animals wait to pluck me from the water Within a few hundred feet the currents become calm and smooth It is easy to push upstream in the slow moving water However danger still lurks from the banks of the river and the sky Now the river has become fast and rough The white water rapids force me to push forward up the river or lose my ground and begin again I muster my strength and push closure toward my ultimate goal The white water leads me to the hardest obstacle I have had to face the dam The mass placed between me and my home waters must be overcome Determined not to fail I utilize the tools my allies have provided to climb up the dam to the other side If this fails I contact my fellow salmon to help me find a way around the large obstacle I repeat this process many times on the way home I use my instinct to help me return to home waters It guides me like a map up the dangerous waterways If I should take the wrong stream it will help me to correct my mistake and bring me back on course Now I am very close to homeThe journey has been hard The classroom is my final goal I have made it The struggle
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