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Hold on I said lazily to my motherIll be there in just a minute Today was the day we would go to the beach for our family reunion It was the third family reunion this year Right now Im fourteen and so far in my lifetime I have had twenty-six family reunions Thats two every year As I got into the van and my started to take off The trip to the beach takes about and hour and three-fourths of the way there I realized I had forgotten my swimming trunks Mom I forgot my trunks Well I guess you wont go swimming today Well that ruined my ride there How was I supposed to have any fun Swimming was the main thing my family was going to do there Five miles to go said Dad Already my trip had started out bad Finally we got there only to have my cheeks pulled at by my grandmothers and aunts I would rather be dead than go through this It seems that somehow I got my wish I fell right out of their grubby hands and fell to the ground I got back up only to see myself still on the ground I must be out of my body But just as quick as I had got out of my body I was back in it What did you do that for asked Grandma Betty I couldnt help it my soul just popped out of my body and I was standing right there and then I thought I must be out of my body and I said it was cool and then I just popped right back into it I said excitedly You need a rest said mother Maybe the sea air has gotten to you come over here But honest mother I really left my body Im fine She didnt buy it she made me sit on the bench until she thought I was better
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