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802 am Saturday Its still dark as usual on these cold winter days Everybody else isstill sleeping and enjoying the comforting heat of their beds I crack open the locked window bymy bed an act some deemed downright idiotic I strip off my pjs throw on my robe and head forDrying off I think about where I am about to go I dress piece by layered piece I cantwait to hit the slopes I round up my tools body boards boots bindings Everything is inworking order and ready for take- off As I open the front door I am shocked by the cold andfight my way through the wind to my car I turn the key and put the heater on full blast I amI step out of my car and survey the parking lot Not too many cars Thats the way I like itI take a deep breath and savor the frsh air Already I can feel the pressure of deadlines lifted offmy chest I strap my skis on and prepare not just to tackle a run but other situations in my life aswell I skate over to the first pitch of the double diamond slope and map out where I will take thefirst couple turns It is almost like I am assessing my goals in life getting accepted into Syracuseowning a house in Colorado raising a healthy familyI appreciate the sound of carving the first turn as if it was my very last The crunching ofthe snow under my feet empowers me to crush the antagonists in my everyday life The secondand third turns secure my self- confidence Only with the fourth turn do I start to realize thatI heard it said often Its easier said than done I never believed it until now I only skidslightly over a patch of ice but it is enough to start my heart thumping I am suddenly aware thatto finish this run or to reach my
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