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Neat freak Sarah and I have been best friends since the sixth grade During our freshman year of high school I spent about two weeks straight at her house My mother had gone away and I needed somewhere to stay because my mother didnt trust me at home by myself It was during those two weeks at Sarahs house I found out her dark secret My best friend Sarah is a neat-freak First of all lets talk about Sarahs car She has a white 1988 Chevy pick up truck that he older brother gave her when he got his new Honda and she treats it as if it were a Porsche Every other day she is in the driveway soaping up her truck With out fail she makes sure every little nook and cranny is cleaned waxed polished and dried before the sun can dry it and leave water spots on it Sarah also scrubs soaps and polishes every tire on her truck Next Sarah works on the inside of her car She vacuums her car seats and carpets everyday and asks anyone entering her car to please take their shoes off She is even a neat freak about her CD player Every CD that goes into her player is inspected to make sure that it doesnt have a scratch on it and it wont ruin her neatly Windexed player Next there is Sarahs schoolwork Before class Sarah is very prepared and neat Sarah lays out all of the notes she took the day before and reviews the notes in the same order she took them Also while sitting in class before class starts she neatly sets out one pen one pencil an eraser and two sheets of paper Sarah is also very neat during class She makes sure she sits in the same exact chair every day She also carries a box of pampers baby wipes with her so that she
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