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She struggled to remember how the fight had started She and Ryan and some friends had been watching a movie and she commented on how cute the lead actor was Cuter than me Ryan asked Lizzy jumped into damage-control mode and attempted to diffuse the situation Of course not she replied Then why did you say he was cute Ryan continued on the attack I meant in a different sort of way Lizzy explained her voice breaking with each word She felt all eyes were on them It was a scene her friends had seen many times yet they never spoke up afraid to interfere Maybe it was because of all the times she had defended him Hes different when were alone shed say He doesnt really mean it The party quickly broke up and Lizzy said a silent prayer that he would calm down by the time they reached the car and had to be alone The ride home seemed to take hours She sat as close to the door as she could foolishly believing that she was out of his reach Maybe physically for the moment Lizzy thought but mentally and emotionally Ryan had an incredibly tight grip When they pulled up to her house Ryan turned to her Dont you ever make me look stupid like that again he scolded her He stared straight into her eyes almost through her she thought I didnt mean to she said defensively I was just having fun So you find it fun to embarrass me by drooling over other guys How do you think that makes me look Like Im not good enough for you Is that what you think Lizzy shook her head no Well Ill tell you what he continued Im the best thing that ever happened to you and youll never find anyone else that will put up with you the way I do There it was again He had told her
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