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Hurry up Joe Its 1015 your fifteen minutes late Claire screamed from outside the dressing room with a hint of a New York Accent Claire was Santas helper at the mall Im coming Joe yelled back Stupid kids I hate kids Joe mumbled to himself while getting himself dressed Joe was the Santa at the local mall Since Joe had just been released from the mental institution for insanity the cost of the institution wiped him out of money so he needed the job badly When the job was offered to him he had to take it Joe was a scrawny man Not your usual Santa Clause He had no rosy cheeks or round belly he didnt have the hearty laugh nor real white hair His ribs poked out of his skin and his stomach looked like an empty cave His eyes were pushed into his head way more than most people the dark rings circling his made his eyes look like they were going to pop out any second The bones of his cheeks showed through his dry pale skin making him look like a zombie Lets go now Claire screeched at the top of her lungs Claire meant this time Quickly Joe stumbled out of the dressing room in a clumsy fashion Looking like he had just chugged a couple of kegs dragged his oversized Santa coat and pants with him hopping they wouldnt fall down and left the dressing room Joe and Claire walked toward where Santas hut was while watching a crowd gather around it Ya know Claire Joe said I really hate my job Really replied Claire in a sarcastic tone Who doesnt hate little brats crawling around on your lap Joe sat down in his special Santa chair and waited for the first child
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