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Candlestick From the outside the ominous looking creature gives no hint of the magic occurring inside its masses of stone cold concrete and powerful steel As my eyes struggle to absorb the magnitude of my surroundings each individual hair stands up on the back of my neck My excitement turns to amazement I am struck by the beautiful purity of the empty expanse of brown and green This is not the same dirt we all know It is a deep rich reddish brown color neatly raked and spotless It is as earth tone rich as the carefully clipped grass is bright green -- a fantastical stage The sea of endless people dressed in orange and black surround the enclosed field A brown haired little boy wearing an over-sized backward hat sits on the edge of the chair in front of me He focuses intently on his Drumstick Gooey chocolate drips from his chin Venders selling an array of paraphernalia pace the aisles A mass of silver dollar size light bulbs display statistics and scores Neon advertisements compete with the surreal beauty of the surroundings for my attention The stadium rim sits above hundreds of rows of fans It creates an unblemished oval view screen framing the pure evening sky The perfectly groomed grass looked as though it was cut blade by blade with scissors The green color runs vibrant throughout the crowd begging to be admired The monotone buzz of the crowd is like a volcano on the verge of eruption Old men debate about the best player of all time A proud father shares his knowledge of the game with Boyar 2 his daughter Peanuts here echoes as a vender tries to pawn his goods The home plate umpire bellows Strike Three Taken by themselves the sounds within this magical place are so simple yet when blended together they create a unique mosaic The bouquet of beer hot dogs and
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