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when i saw you open that door to me you just took my breath away i could hardly contain myself you are the sexiest most desireable woman i have ever laid my eyes on damn those reservations i told myself but i know how much you have prepared for this moment to go out with me made up your hair bought yourself a new outfit god you neednt have i say to myself because you could have just worn your ordinary clothes and you would still look ravishing for me because thats what you do to me as i give you the roses you turn and put them in a vase you are so sexy as you give me a glimpse of your back the curves damn those reservations i sit down on the sofa and wait for you to come sit next to me even for a second i would love to kiss you and hold you tight but i would had to be turned away because of the lipstick that i would smudge you sit down bringing the wine my god that perfume is driving me wild with want i hope you dont notice the movement in my groin its getting to be so uneasy now and i am sure you can see how uneasy i am feeling damn i am acting just like a teenager its time to go and i really want to take you in my arms and spend the night in dont want to share you with anyone just feast my eyes on you images run through my mind of us by the fireplace with wine in our hands and talking maybe when we get back oh well it is time to go i am helping you with your coat and you look like you have twisted your ankle my god it is my fault i should have not wished to be with you alone so badly
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