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Several months ago my best friend Dana McFarland tried to do a terrible thing She tried to take her own life by overdosing on some pills I was really shocked when Ifound out I asked her why she didnt let anyone know how she was feeling She repliedI felt like no one would understand I told her she could always talk to me aboutanything and I would do my best to try and help her Dana told me that she had felt really depressed for weeks She also told me shedidnt know why she had been feeling like that From what I could see she had a lot goingfor her Dana had just gotten a brand new car she had a great boyfriend and she hadfriends and family that loved her It seemed that Dana was living the life I always wanted Dana told me that after she took those pills she laid there for about ten minutes and thenrealized that she did not want to die Dana told her mother what she did and theAt the hospital they ran some test on her and made her drink some black stuffcalled charcoal Dana told me that it tasted really nasty She said it almost made her throwup The doctors told her that if she drank all the charcoal that she would be okay Theymade Dana stay at the hospital for four hours for observation After the four hours wereup they said that she could go home but she need to get help as soon as possibleThe next day Danas parents took her to charter They did evaluated her Danatold me they asked her a whole lot of questions and that some of them were really dumbones She told them that she still felt depressed but that she did not want to die Danarealized now that there were people willing to help her The woman at Charter told Danathat they felt like she did not need
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