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Should I grow grapes Looking back on the days that I used to have to run into the halls at BJ to get my brother after school I dont know what I was thinking As I entered the large front door I couldnt help but think how amazing it would be when I was in 7th grade and I got to walk through those doors as a student I couldnt wait until it was my turn to mess around with my friends and joke with the teachers Nothing like that ever happened at my school Why wasnt elementary school this cool Finally I made it to the 7th grade and although I never got to be at BJ it was just as good to walk through the doors at the J I had what I wanted from school That close community feeling the relationship with everyone the feeling that everyone really cared about you When I would cry teachers would comfort me They would involve themselves in whatever it was that was causing these tears and try to solve my problem It wasnt until later in my journey that I realized they had overstepped boundaries that certainly werent meant to be overstepped I looked up to these teachers when I started they were the best there could be Most of them seemed totally dedicated to nothing but our learning The example they set appeared to be the appropriate one Now I wonder how I could have been so foolish and nave What was I thinking Why was I under the impression that a teacher could involve herself in your personal business without even asking Where did I get the idea that whatever they said even on a more personal level was right Why did I brush off the comments they made even when I knew that they werent appropriate for any adult to be making to a student The things they
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