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June Stephensons passage is about how men commit the most crime in America and women are still expected to pay their unfair share for male pursuit June suggests that since men outnumber women ninety-four to six men should pay one hundred dollars more in their IRS returns The author carries a chauvinist tone through out the passage and really gets carried away when she starts blaming all men because we are all brothers I strongly disagree We can not start pointing fingers and say men commit most of the crime so men have to pay more taxes I especially disagree with the statement that we all share the blame for crime because we are all brothers How can she expect that us as men take responsibility for actions of other menThe first reason I disagree is because why should men pay more tax than women it is like saying if more Latino or black men are in prison Latino and black men should pay more taxes Does a commuter that uses the freeway five or more times a week pay more tax than a person who does not commute to work and uses the freeway five time in a year Does a taxpayer with five children pay more school tax than a taxpayer with no kids We as taxpayers get taxed according to our income not on how much we use tax money Another reason I strongly disagree with Junes passage is when she says Your brothers are murders stock market manipulators gang rapists robbers arsonists litters polluters and child abusers What Women do not commit any of these crimes The author thinks that just being a male one has to share the blame for crimes because it is our brothers That is the most illogical and ridiculous thing I have ever read in my life Does June share the blame for those women who are in prison because it is her sistersFinally I disagree
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