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For some time now I have had an eleven oclock curfew even on weekends When I was younger this curfew was fine and I didnt really complain But now I have reached an age when this curfew is no longer suitable For several reasons it is clearly time to move my curfew to 1230 on weekends First of all I am growing up and Im soon going to be an adult Like all teenagers I need practice handling the greater freedom that goes along with being an adult When teenagers dont get practice handling freedom they often make many serious mistakes For example some teenagers go away to college and suddenly find themselves with a lot of freedom they arent used to They dont know how to handle it and they get into trouble- partying too much neglecting school work sometimes even breaking the law I believe it is better to increase freedom gradually while a boy or girl is still living at home That way the teenager learns how to handle freedom responsibly I am ready to handle the freedom of a later curfew and I believe I could handle it without making serious mistakes in judgment A later curfew is also important to be because Im an active student As you know I take part in many extra-curricular activities and many of these activities do not end until midnight Because of my present curfew I have to leave school functions over an hour before they are over This is embarrassing and unfair especially because I am often on the committee in charge of running these activities Other students must take over for me when I leave It also makes my friends think my parents dont trust me I know that isnt true but I can see why they would think that A 1230 curfew would allow me to stay until the end of school functions and give me enough time to
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