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We were the metal Ericson stadium the magnet With the burning heat reaching down to scold our pale defenceless faces we began walking impatiently at a pressing pace towards the stadium The stadium projected a hum of activity and instrumental sound which was deafening the ear already We clutched our tickets tightly as though they contained the final ingredient to the cure of cancer Rapidly consuming energy drinks which were to provide us with the weaponry energy to battle a physically and mentally tiring day of dancing and trancing to magical beats and vocals We swarmed with countless other bees to the gate of the hive The excitement at this point was unmeasurable indescribable undefinable We entered mesmerised it would have been mentally impossible to take in what surrounded me at once frozen with shock my eyes flickerd as though malfunctioning enjoying fragments of what there was to see There were t shirt sales pricing stands EFTPOS machines people autograph signing booths people stages and people tents and people rides skateboard ramps and more people With no knowledge of direction I journeyed into close proximity of the main stage where Australian band Regurgatator encouraged thousands of rocking heads We ventured through the crowd to destination unknown with our path being dictated by others equally as lost In time I gathered my senses and began to absorb the surroundings the best I could I obtained the timetable of acts which educated me one of my favourite bands HDU had begun their set and I was alarmed I scarpered with hast to the big tent where they were playing Vigorously focused on reaching the front I passionately fought my way through undeserving listeners to then enjoy their slow mind exploring sounds I slipd into a hypnotic state of mind swaying to the movement of the trancing beat as pulsating vibrations penetrate my whole body from limb to limb
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