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Silence was my companion as I walked along the lonely dirt road It was a dry hot summers day I could hear my footsteps and I could see the dust rise up at my feet with each step I took I could see that it had been a long time since anyone used this particular road As I followed the road I discovered it led to an old abandoned house I couldnt help but stop for a few minutes and take in the details of the massive strange shaped house I noticed it had been a long time since this house saw any kind of attention Poor old house Left to die alone with no one to care The paint was peeling windows were broke the yard was nothing but weeds and shingles had been torn from the roof probably by past storms This house was huge and probably gorgeous in its day Three full stories The fourth floor had a loft so one could look out and gaze upon the end of the day as the sun set on the horizon The house also had a huge porch with large white columns supporting a balcony If I used my imagination I could see the owners sitting on their porch swing watching the evening train roll past on the now rusting old tracks not far from the front of the house I could see children playing hide-and-go-seek under the porch Yes this house was at one time a site to behold As I slowly continued my walk pass the house I could hear the wind whistling through the broken windows I could see the remnants of the curtains moving gentle in the breeze Another image flashed into my mind This house also reminded me of the movie Psycho with Carl Perkins I began to wonder what might be looking out at me from one of the dark hollow windows I decided to pick
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