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Im 16 years old It is April and the springs incense is gliding through the air I can feel the breeze push through my hair keeping my eyelids far from closing It was the most beautiful day of the year and I remember lying near my pool feeling luxurious and relaxed I felt the way every teenager should want to feel at my age free and content My life consisted of spending countless moments gossiping about lifes flaws instead of lifes gifts What bewildered me the most was the fact that my life was going so smoothly with out any cost At the time I could almost grasp that moment where I felt like the happiest person life could bring I loved what I had but was it that I had begun to speak and think too soon Was there really a cost to my happiness Sooner than I knew my answer had come The environment of the house began to change as well as my parents moods Constant arguments would occur and I would find my mother trying to comfort my father more often I wasnt quite sure what was happening until my mother whispered it to me one day Youre father is having a lot of problems at work He is under going a lot of stress lately and you have to make sure you dont do anything to upset him I wasnt too worried about this because I knew things would become positive again After thinking this through once or twice my mind became situated on one thing buying a new car I had waited 16 years of my life for it and it still wasnt in my hands A few days later my father came home with a smile and a bit of courage on his face I knew things would become positive for him again and I was right Positive for him but horrible for us He quit his job
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