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We won our softball game today It was really an exciting win There were two outs in the bottom of the 9th I was up to bat Everyone was cheering for me as stepped up to the plate The first pitch was high and I laid off it The second pitch came I laced a home run over center field As I rounded the bases everybody was chanting Lucy LucyErnie Capadio from Major League Baseball stopped by today after my game He wanted to know if I wanted to play in the new womens baseball league because all the men were across the oceans fighting the Japs or Nazis I was a little hesitant at first but then he told me I would be making 75 a week and I agreed to go So tomorrow I board a train for Chicago We stopped today on the way to Chicago at a town called South Bend Indiana to watch another player for the league Boy could she hit the ball a ton She was batting in a gym and I think she broke every window in the place Another amazing thing is that she can hit with both hands Her name is Marla shes not the best looking girl around so Ernie deiced she couldnt come I couldnt believe this just because she was a little ugly he wasnt going to bring her So you know what I did I dropped my bags right there in that gym and said if she dont go I dont go So Ernie agreed and Marla got to come along Tryouts started today in Harvey Field There are over 100 girls trying out Some girls are good ballplayers and some bad The league is going to have four teams with sixteen girls on each one Tryouts will be over the next four days I hope I make a team Wish me luckToday the coaches sat everyone down and told us
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