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How Other World Religions View Jesus Christ

This comparative religion essay on non-Christian interpretations of Jesus explores Muslim and Buddhist perspectives. The student explains Jesus' status as a major prophet in Islam and argues that the Christian Jesus is incompatible with Buddhist tenets regarding deities. Finally, the student explains their own personal convictions from the Roman Catholic point of view.
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Bridget's feedback:

"I really appreciate your tone and balanced approach, and I think it's a great idea to present the more objective discussion before moving into the personal reflection toward the end. This shows a good sense of ethos and argumentation that is present at the microlevel as well. I see opportunities to finetune the Buddhism paragraph, as most of it is given over to background; in an essay of this length and pace, I suggest streamlining the introduction to Buddhism so you can move into the specific discussion regarding Jesus; as regards the latter, the present draft provides a generalized discussion to apply to Jesus, rather than direct commentary on Jesus from the Buddhist perspective. Consider some further research to help strengthen that paragraph and introduce specificity. (Is there any tradition of Jesus as a bodhisattva?)

Use a thorough proofread to catch some awkward phrasing and occasional errors. The flow and syntax are sound, so this will be a matter of zooming in and polishing up. We can workshop the first sentence as an example, where the comma between "was, is" should be deleted; if you feel this reads awkwardly, you can also flip the sentence around: "A common question that arises even in the Christian religion is...""

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