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The first time I met my husband the last thing I thought about him was that we were meant for each other In fact I believed quite the opposite I was a junior in high school when I met Cole and he was dating my best friend at the time Gretta There were so many reasons why I didnt like him He never took her to our prom she went by herself At her graduation he sat in the bleachers as far away from the stage as he could chewed gum like a cow with cud and did not applaud when his girlfriend won one award after another At her graduation party he found it hilarious to throw dead palmetto bugs at me while I was in the pool I found him rude his sense of humor childish he had bleached-blond hair which was awful and worst of all he was a musician His only redeeming quality was that he lived over an hour away from us so Gretta only got to see him on the weekends Of course that meant listening to her talk about him in our second-period chorus class with that dreamy voice and stars in her eyes They broke up that summer and being young and pretty Gretta bounced back easily She seemed to go from bad to worse as far as boyfriends go but her romantic life was her own She and Cole remained friends and an on-and-off couple during her first year at College of Charleston It was that summer after I graduated that I began to see Cole first as a friend then as more Gretta and I went to visit Cole one day in August of 1996 and I found him to be quieter more reserved his sense of humor and hairstyle matured I noticed that day how much we had in common how we liked things and understood things which Gretta didnt We were
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