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There we stand our hands locked in a marriage which seemed so impenetrable Yet we knew that it was time for this marriage to have its temporary divorce Promise me you will be back David We still have the entire summer before we leave each other for college my tear-drenched girlfriend says Yes I promise Kate Dont worry my parents really want me to get adjusted there but I will back soon I said has her reminder of our soon to come separation trembled my heart These were adjustments which my parents as while as I felt were needed to be established well before my college began This is because now I was living with two younger cousins both of whom had just came to this country my grandmother and my big brother This new life required for me to undergo several adjustments These adjustments included esstialy getting to know my cousins and my grandmother as well as learn how to operate my bothers gift store Due to the dramtic lifestyle change this required from me my girlfriend knew I had to go So I told her I loved her gave her a hug and boarded the plane to Columbia South Carolina The entire time believing that our relationship which spun the last two years was intact The plane arrived in Columbia and I made the drive to Augusta Georgia and immediately setting out to accomplish my adjustments with a uinreliqushing desire This desire stemmed from my want to be back with my girlfriend Two weeks go by and I have successful adjusted to my new life in Augusta GA A few days later however just a day before I was scheduled to go back to Cincinnati my grandmother suffered a stroke and in that instant our divorce became permanent Suddenly I found myself in one of the worst situations of my life forced to decide on several issues These issues however caused me to
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