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The ground was cold and my head was throbbing In the distance I couldhear my grandmas voice calling out my name Kourtney Kourtney Canyou hear me She sounds distressed almost like she is getting readyto cry It happened again I fainted I could hear all the commotiongoing on around me but I could not get my body to respond The sound ofpeople talking rang through my ears because I knew I would never livethis down I just focused on my friend holding my hand her warm touchmade everything seem a bit better As I opened my eyes I was blinded by the bright lights of the TroyBuchanan High School basement and greeted by a Lincoln County paramedicviolently rubbing her knuckles against my sternum Confused and shakingthey picked up my pale body and laid it on a stretcher to wheel into theambulance Next thing I know there is an IV in my arm multiple wirestapped against my skin and machines beeping as my heart rate slowlyreturned to normal I laid there in my confined little room as theyran tests to see what caused me to faint again Right as they werewalking out my mom ran into the room and I could tell she had beencrying by the lines of mascara running down her cheeks I gave her thatlook we give each other reassuring her everything was okay I started to think about what I was doing not even ten minutes before itall happened I sat in the choir room laughing with friends having funand singing a song we had been rehearsing for weeks like I do everypurple day fourth block I was amazed at how all of this happened soquickly In a span of ten to fifteen minutes I was diagnosed with acondition I have to live with for the rest of my life POTS PosturalOrthostatic Tachycardia Syndrome a condition in which a limited amountof blood returns to my heart after I stand up The main
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