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Peer Pressure Peer pressure is something we have all experienced before maybe it was when you wanted approval from older siblings your teenage friends What ever the case may be it is the pressure from within ourselves that make us want to explode sometimes When I was younger seven or eight years old I felt a need to get approval from my older brothers and sisters I was the one that my parents always came to when they wanted to know the truth as to what happened One day my parents left the house and told us do not go outside while they are gone The minute they left we were outside jumping the fence I felt so thrilled and happy to be outside with my brothers and sisters knowing we were going to play together As I jumped down from the fence and landed I felt scared because we were told not to go outside until our parents came back I knew what i was doing was wrong but I could not go back home without my brothers and sisters because they would be mad at me I knew I did not want to stay I felt trapped I did not know what to do I had a bad feeling at the pit of my stomach Everyone looked as if they were having fun I was terrified thinking my parents were going to step in the back yard any time now and yell at us to come in the house All the sudden there was a big crash My brother had broken the next door neighbors window Everyone ran home Inside the house my siblings looked at me wondering if I was going to tell They told me not tell and if I did they would not take me along any more My feelings were hurt I did not want to lie and I did not want
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