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"You are off to a great start; as your reader, I really appreciate that you back up each claim with a source. This creates ethos and also helps any reader who may want to look further into the literature.
As you move forward, my first suggestion is in organization and paragraphing. You move the discussion logically, but it is occasionally difficult to determine why a new paragraph has been started. Grouping and intrapragraph transitional language will help create flow and guide the reader more actively. (Alternatively, an option for your overview of the four theories may be a bulleted list.)
Keep an eye, as well, on how formatting helps the reader. For example, the numbered list at the bottom of page 1 is a little hard to navigate (it also isn't a complete sentence). Check your style guide for presenting and using lists; also take a look at line spacing and other page and font guidelines that create a good visual experience for the reader."
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Kibin. (2024). An introduction to using ect for treatment-resistant depression. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/an-introduction-to-using-ect-for-treatment-resistant-depression-BUKcoWLm
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("An Introduction to Using ECT for Treatment-Resistant Depression.")
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"An Introduction to Using ECT for Treatment-Resistant Depression." Kibin, 2024, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/an-introduction-to-using-ect-for-treatment-resistant-depression-BUKcoWLm
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1. "An Introduction to Using ECT for Treatment-Resistant Depression." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/an-introduction-to-using-ect-for-treatment-resistant-depression-BUKcoWLm.
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"An Introduction to Using ECT for Treatment-Resistant Depression." Kibin, 2024. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/an-introduction-to-using-ect-for-treatment-resistant-depression-BUKcoWLm.
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