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Millions of thoughts race through my mind everyday After all this time I should have endless things to say about it but I struggle to fill a few pages describing what runs through it The concept of exposing my personal thoughts terrifies me Why should I let a perfect stranger know how I look at the world I dont want to convert anyone to my beliefs I respect whatever ideals they choose to live by However I need to conquer my fears of opening up to others so I will share a few of my inner thoughts I try to believe that hard work and persistence pay off The painful truth is that talent can take some people just as far No matter what I accomplish in life I know there is always someone else who achieved the same thing with less work and effort In gymnastics I saw my peers catch onto new skills in a flash while I worked for hours at the same thing I envied their abilities but I despised their efforts I hate getting something for nothing I feel empty when I dont feel like I deserve what I have I strive for perfection but I know its only a myth When I was nine I decided that perfection is not reality My summer league swim coach explained to me that there is one perfect person in the world and I am not Him Since I do not really believe in God I stopped believing in perfection I still aim for it and I consider myself a perfectionist However I know there will always be minor flaws no matter how hard I try to avoid them This paper proves that I have spent hours trying to describe my intellect in a coherent grammatically correct manner but I know I have faltered in many areas I question everything This can be helpful but it is also stressful Whenever I am
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