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In my mind I see a long white corridor and the length of this corridor is infinite Hanging from the ceiling is a flashing neon sign and on that sign is the word SUCCESS As I look down the corridor I can see beautifully carved mahogany doors with shiny brass knobs Mounted on the front of all the doors are shiny brass plates that are marked OPPORTUNITY I walk to the first door and try to open it but the door is locked so I move down the corridor to the next door I place my hand on the knob and try turning it only to find that this door is also locked I go from one door to the next trying another and another Before long I find myself running frantically down the corridor jiggling all the door knobs They are all locked and no matter how hard I try none of them can be opened Frustrated I hang my head in defeat and walk back to the beginning of the corridor It is a long walk and I feel alone trapped in this corridor not knowing where to turn or what to do as I search for a way out When I reach the place where my journey began I notice a table that was not there before I approach the table it is draped with a white cloth and on it lays a golden key with a filigree handle I pick up the key which is pleasantly warm and heavy to examine it more closely Turning the key over and over in my hands I can see two words engraved on the handle they are COLLEGE EDUCATION As I stare at this key wondering where it came from and why it is here an idea forms in my mind I approach the first door the one that I could not open before Standing there I look at the key in
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