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I cant believe this is actually happening my single most desired dream has finally come true With my hands shaking from sheer astonishment I hold my second semester report card not believing that the number printed adjacent to the word GPA is actually a 40 The first few minutes are spent trying to absorb reality Can this really be happening Have I finally obtained the GPA that I have shot for all my life I feel myself in a dreamlike state of mind as if a trance has fallen over me Then it finally sets in A sudden joy sweeps through my body rejuvenating it right down to the last cell I jump up out of my chair knocking it to the ground and start prancing around the room like a blissful fairy At this point I can hardly contain myself as I struggle to keep the exhilaration to a minimum As a tradition I like to trick my mom into thinking that I did something bad so when she finds out that I actually did something good she will be even more thrilled of my achievement I rush out of my room and down to the kitchen where my mom is making dinner At the bottom of the staircase I stop and improvise a strategic plan of execution Now I am becoming very jittery with a combination of eagerness and euphoria Quickly I pull myself together whip up a sad face and enter the room The minute my mom looks at my face she knows what I am sad about and simply sticks out her hand in disappointment I can tell by my moms inert body language that she is really let down by my laziness in school and failure to receive a 40 Little does she know that her days of praying for a good report card are over and that her son has finally accomplished the feat once thought impossible to achieve
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