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On Christmas break I got a call from my friends cousin that my best friend Donna was at an intersection and a semi-truck smashed into her going sixty miles per hour putting her into a coma Sadly she passed away She was only eighteen years old and passed away a week before her birthdayIt was a cold day on Christmas break I was exhausted from all the family gatherings so I stayed home for the day I was expecting a nice relaxing day drinking hot chocolate and watching movies All of a sudden everything changed I texted my friend Donna to see what she was doing We always together and when we are not we are usually texting I waited about an hour and realized something was wrong Donna always has her phone on her She never takes that long to reply I just waited nervously hoping she was asleep or something Later on my phone started ringing from an odd number I answered and it was Donnas cousin She told me that my friend was in a horrible accident and went into a coma and I needed to go the hospital immediately I frantically rushed to the hospital My mind was in all different places I have always heard stories about people waking up from a coma so I tried to think positive When I arrived I was directed to the ICU I slowly walked into Donnas room I tried to barely look at her because I was scared to realize that her condition was worse than I hoped I took a deep breath and looked at her She looked quiet and looked pretty normal to me I looked at her hair and it had blood tangled in it The blood looked fresh Donna had many tubes running in and out of her The tube that worried me the most was in the middle of her throat She was on a ventilator Also
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