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HOW WOULD YOU FEEL A wound becomes a scar that goes away or stays forever of course this depends on how deep the wound is Scars that are permanent are usually unpleasant to see and cause embarrassment Though scars usually occur on the skin they can also make their mark on the heart Scars to the heart are not made physically but emotionally It is said that these types of scars are permanent if not deadly due to their cause I found that out one day while I was taking full advantage of recess and was worried only of getting tagged Nothing could have bothered me on that cool October morning and nothing could have warned me of the horrific event that would change my life forever In that half hour of recess I knew I was a regular kid like everyone else and I knew that my friends liked me for whom I was It had never occurred to me that someone might dislike me or even hate me for who I was At the age of six I was still ignorant of the many wounds life had to offer and especially those that would scar forever There I was playing with my friends Mark John Mathew Kenny and Lloyd We were desperately running away from Kenny because we had just thrown him into the BFI dumpster He had a revolting smell and was trying to contaminate us with his stench by trying to touch us The teachers found out and decided to end recess early Like in any of these situations we were lined up and asked how this was done and who did it Well Mark and Lloyd confessed their sin and were taken away During this time I bent down to tie my shoe If I knew what was going to happen at that moment I
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