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It was a hot summer day in Houston Texas The sun was emanating 101 degrees Fahrenheit of heat Sweat was bearing down our faces like rain pouring on a rainy day The air conditioning had stopped working the day before Therefore the heat started to make my two brothers and me anxious and restless I remembered that my father had stored a little black floor fan in my closet I ran to my closet to grab a hold of it and hooked the plug into the outlet As the fan started I could feel the breeze passing through my face and into my hair My two brothers started to feel jealous so they started to wrestle with me in order for them to get the front row seats by the little floor fan Our mother in the effort to ease our restlessness said Lets go to the swimming pool you all will feel much cooler there I started to panic and responded s-swimming pool I do not want to go to the swimming pool Whereas both of my brothers excitedly said We are going to swimming pool As soon as I heard the word swimming pool I started to panic and remembered the time when all my friends cousins and brothers were laughing at me for not knowing how to swim without a life jacket I started to feel the shame and embarrassment rising from my heart to my face alas causing my cheeks to redden like a tomato I was older than most of my cousins who already knew how to swim and had graduated from the kids pool onto the adult pool Their laughter was constantly ringing in my head After that point I made up my mind that I would never go to the swimming pool ever again I asked my mother to come with me to the corner because I wanted to speak to her She came and I whispered in
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