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She Found Out She ran her guitar kicking at the back of her legs A hit she thought excitedly I know its a hit Luanne opened the wood screen door and ran inside The door pounded shut with a series of bangs each one softer than the last Dave She tripped over Mr Whiskers her cat and fell forward onto the floor the guitar serenading her with an unmelodic accompaniment For Gods sake Mr Whiskers You know I cant see you in the dark She pulled the guitar from her back and checked for any signs of damage None were visible She patted the black cat between its ears Dave Her voice bounced off the walls echoing the fact that she was alone Okay Mr Whiskers you wanna listen She picked her guitar up from the floor and sat down on the couch The cat jumped up next to her and rubbed its head on the underside of her arm purring in a loud baritone cat voice How bout you She yelled to her dog Alec She pulled the leather strap over her shoulder snugged her guitar into place under her chest and plucked at the strings successively to retune Dave had bought the Fender for her last year after she won the Bow Ridge Talent Search Baby one day youll be a big ol star He said when he handed it to her For the last year she had put all her efforts into becoming the next Shania Twain She was tall and pretty and blond That wasnt enough though Nashville was full of pretty blondes She needed a hit A song to propel her to the top of the charts She had been writing music since she was twelve now at twenty-two she had quite a large body of music to pull from Today had been the best day in her life She wrote her latest song while
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