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Max sat in class gazing at Clare Jones He watched as she leaned over to her friend Julie and passed her a note Her small school blouse and shorter-than-normal skirt defined her curvaceous body Julie saw Max watching her friend She giggled and motioned to Clare to look behind her Clare turned and looked back at Max Max was caught out His elbow slipped on the desk and dislodged his small tin pencil box It crashed to the floor making a loud noise The entire class turned and laughed at Max He felt the heat of a crimson blush as a rush of prickles ran up his back from embarrassment He glanced back at Clare and Julie who were still looking at him giggling A quiet fury surged inside him He hated it when people laughed at him It was worse when Clare did though She seemed to know he liked her Humiliated Max slumped in his chair He lowered his gaze to his desk Surely no more ridicule would eventuate if he lay low for the rest of the lesson Max Faulkner shouted the Legal Studies teacher Mr Finch Would you stop daydreaming and concentrate I dont like your attitude young man Im trying to inform the class about the Queensland court system and all you can do is stare at your desk Please pay attention Im sure if your attitude does not improve youll learn more about the courts first hand Max could hear muffled laughter around the classroom The other students were careful not to exacerbate Mr Finchs aggravationThe class erupted in laughter when Maxs voice faltered He had been keeping quiet in the last few weeks because he knew that he couldnt trust his changing voice The class struggled to regain composure Max sank back in his chair and looked straight ahead at the white boardFinch chuckled to himself seemingly pleased at the humiliation he caused Max As the class settled
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