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On June 6 2009 my friend Holly and I were involved in a single car crash I was killed but Holly survivedIt all started the night of June 5 2009 at 1056 PM I was on my way home from work Holly was sleeping over I had picked up Holly and we were on our way to my house My boyfriend had texted me and I thought everything would be okay if I took my eyes off the road for just thirty secondsThe next thing I witnessed was flashing lights everywhere and sirens wailing in the distance Before I knew it I was in a hospital room machines beeping IVs everywhere and doctors and nurses rushing in and out of my room My mom came in and told me that Holly and I had been in a car accident and she said that I was in critical conditions but Holly only has a broken leg arm and 2 fractured ribs and will be going home in about 3 days I felt terrible because this whole thing was my fault I thought that if only I didnt take my eyes off the road Holly and I might not be in here right nowThe next day I was looking over my mom and dads shoulder in the living room as they were making my funeral arrangements Mom was crying so hard she couldnt talk so dad did most of the talkingI decided I would finally go check on Holly real quick She didnt look so well I felt terrible I deserved to die she didnt Wait a minute Holly is saying something to her dad She told him she wished she had died and I had lived so my mom would be happy again I was sick to my stomach just seeing her Its been a year since this whole thing has happened Mom Dad Holly and her parents are at the cemetery with flowers and presents
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