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Over the twenty years that I haved lived I have had a lot of moments inmy life that have made me who I am today Although there is one greatdefining moment that I will always remember and look back on because itwas what made me who I am more than anything I have ever been threw Itwas in 2009 when I got married and started my familyI was a wild child untill I found the most amazing man that I had everseen He was different from anyone I knew he was kind sweet and hehad the same kind of interests as I did When he asked me to marry himthere was no way that I could have ever said no In March 2009 when wesaid I do it was the greatest day of my life That wonderful man waschanging me some how I grew up and I found out more about myself that Inever knew I was so in love with this man I did not know I could lovesomeone as much as Ioved this man I was ready to give up everything andchange for the better all for loveIt was only two months after I had got married that I found out that wewas going to start a family I was very shocked and very excited all atthe same time I did not know very much about a baby but I knew that itwas the time to start learning From all the Doctors visits to all theultrasounds it was becoming very real that i was going to be a mom OnNovember 24th 2009 the day my baby girl was born thats when I realizedhow much you I could love someone I thought that as much as I loved myhusband that there was no way you could love anything or anyone moreBut this little tiny baby was mine I helped make her and I loved herwith everything that was in me It was
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