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Finally Sixteen The most important event in my life took place when I was sixteen I got my drivers license When I got my license my whole life changed My friends and I started going out more This was the first time my mother did not have to drive me around I started going out more with the ladies more because I was able to drive Driving changed my life significantly It was on of the proudest moments of my life The first time my friends and I got to out was a Friday night It was awesome Our night started off at around 830 pm We did not go any specific place My friends and I just drove around We went to Caribou Coffee to try and pick up some girls to ride with us That night none of the girls went with us My parents changed my curfew to midnight instead of eleven This worked out good because now I was able to hang out until all hours When you can first stay out until midnight it feels like you can just never go home Most of my friends had an 1145 pm curfew After dropping them off I had just enough time to get home on time When I first told my parents I was going out with my friends they jokingly asked if I wanted them to drive My mom told me that I was all grown up I had the chat with my parents about responsibility They were not concerned with how I drove but how other people on the rode drove At least that was what they told me I felt so good knowing that I could go out with my friends and not have to wait for my mother to pick me up I would not have to ask her to drive and get denied because she did not have time When I started to drive I started
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