A Chronological Look at the Invention of the Radio and Its Evolution Over the Centuries

This essay traces a chronological history of the evolution of the radio. The student discusses its invention and the different uses found for it throughout the past couple of centuries.

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"The chronological organization makes this essay an interesting read. For the most part, you do a great job of tracing the evolution of the radio. Consider explaining why some of the steps (such as vacuum tubes) were necessary.

Watch out for repetitive phrasing (such as "The beginning of a new era [...] was beginning.")

The joke about Fessenden's nickname is amusing but doesn't fit the tone of an academic paper. If you're familiar with your instructor's sense of humor, you might choose to leave it in, but I'd advise against it. (If you do keep it, remember that apostrophes are not used to form a plural.)

Your conclusion brings up several points (like deregulation) that aren't addressed in the body of the paper. It is best to avoid this as your conclusion should simply sum up your points from the rest of the essay."

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Kibin. (2024). A chronological look at the invention of the radio and its evolution over the centuries. http://www.kibin.com/essay-examples/a-chronological-look-at-the-invention-of-the-radio-and-its-evolution-over-the-centuries-j1rMEow1

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("A Chronological Look at the Invention of the Radio and Its Evolution Over the Centuries.")

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"A Chronological Look at the Invention of the Radio and Its Evolution Over the Centuries." Kibin, 2024, www.kibin.com/essay-examples/a-chronological-look-at-the-invention-of-the-radio-and-its-evolution-over-the-centuries-j1rMEow1

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