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How Sexist Double Standards Impact Women Today

This essay examines the various double standards engendered by sexism. The student argues that that these double standards, related to physical appearance and abilities, are present at all stages of a woman's life, whether as a child, entering the workforce, or raising a family. The essay ends with a discussion equating nudity in the arts (film) with exploitation.
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This essay received a C by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Bridget's feedback:

"You bring up some good points, and as your reader, I can trace the progression of the discussion, which takes advantage of life stages to organize paragraph order. I find the purpose of the essay rather hard to determine, particularly in the absence of sources. Consider incorporating research and evidence into the text: this will strengthen ethos and persuasiveness, and a well-chosen piece of sourced evidence can often create more efficient paragraphs by eliminating the need to lay out a longer persuasive moment on argumentative logic alone (which will often, as it does in this draft, read as personal opinion).

Related, the discussion does have a tendency to wander within the paragraphs; introducing solid pieces of evidence will help with this issue, as just described, as will a focused round of revision that looks for redundancy or baggy syntax. A thorough proofread will also be needed to catch frequent errors and check up on some awkward moments that impact clarity at the microlevel."

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