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A History of Printing and Its Influence on Publishing and Society

This essay is about the impact that the creation of periodicals has had on society. The author discussed how technological advances revolutionized the publishing world and how many publications cater to specific groups of people through their articles and advertising.
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"Your paper is off to a good start. In general, the piece is well-formatted. The only issue I found is that paragraphs are inconsistently indented. Overall, you have a reasonably good command of writing conventions. However, you should resolve some grammar, sentence structure, and punctuation errors. The content of your paper is excellent. Some places can benefit from elaboration, and others can benefit from the addition of transition words, phrases, or sentences to create relationships between new ideas. Since you have both an introduction and a conclusion, the organization of your paper is well on its way to being good. Having said this, the introduction does not have a clear thesis statement, so it is not clear the purpose of your paper. The conclusion then does not seem to summarize the points you made in the body of the paper. Because of this, it is not clear that you focus on your purpose throughout your writing. Working on all of these aspects will significantly improve the paper."

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