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Late Early Modern Europe and Why Napoleon Bonaparte Was a Great Leader

In the first short essay, the student provides an overview of eighteenth century Europe, with emphasis on broad trends (capitalism, nation states), conflict (religious tension and colonization), and change (technology). The second short persuasive essay takes the position that Napoleon was a great leader for his effectiveness as a military leader and in governance.
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Bridget's feedback:

"In these two short essays, you do a good job keeping the discussion focused and on topic, with good organization into clear body paragraphs. Your flow is solid, with good transitions; however, some of the word choice and syntax is unclear, resulting in a lack of precision or specificity. This includes some awkward uses of the passive voice and unclear pronouns. I also suggest a more clear thesis statement in your first short essay (the final sentence suggests the discussion is about whether the era was a good one to live in, but this is not clear until that final sentence). And finally, to push your rhetoric to the next level, consider introducing counterarguments in your discussion--this will be particularly beneficial to the Napoleon essay, which stakes out a clear persuasive project. (There is some use of counterargument in the first short essay, but because the purpose is undefined, how these can be most effectively used is currently unclear.)"

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