The Work of the Civilian Conservation Corps in Virginia during the New Deal

This essay on the New Deal Civilian Conservation Corps (CCC) profiles a series of camps built in the Shenandoah Valley: North River (Mount Solon Camp), West Augusta, and Sherando. The student describes the work done by the CCC and explains that many of the trails, roads, and structures are still in use today.

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"Your discussion is clear and easy to follow thanks to solid organization and structure, and a clear sense of focus within each paragraph as well as across the essay as a whole. You've done a good job helping the reader understand the lasting impact of the projects today, making the argument for the relevancy and importance of this discussion. I see an opportunity for a bit of reorganization across the current first two paragraphs, including explaining what the New Deal was in the first paragraph (rather than plopping that point down in the second, as is currently done).

I notice some awkward word choices here and there that, in some cases, end up changing meaning beyond the one moment. I'd like to draw your attention to the use of the word "infiltrate" in the first paragraph, which suggests something clandestine; this could suggest the paper is taking a libertarian stance, but I don't think this is the case -- rather, an adjustment to this word choice will ensure the position of the paper is clear from the start. A careful proofread will also help with occasional minor errors (e.g., comma placement and other punctuation and sentence boundary issues)."

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